BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter

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xetroV wrote:command: break the magnifying glass, take a piece and kill yourself with it.
Ian can't do anything but obey the command. He throws the magnifying glass to the ground, breaking it, and picks a piece of glass.

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He looks at the sharp glass in his hand... he knows what comes next.

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With all his remaining strength, Ian tries to resist to the order, but it's completely impossible. His hand begins moving under the presence's control. He starts to sweat.

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He closes his eyes, ready to accept his death. The small part of his conciousness still under his control starts delirating: Ian hears a male voice, calling for him.

<???>: Hey! Dude! HEY!

Ian finds himself suddenly free from the shadow's possession. He feels it quickly escaping from his body into the darkness, leaving his debilitated brain in charge again.

Ian forces himself to open his eyes and see who just saved him, before falling unconscious.

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Wait...

...that's not...

...Luke?

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Where you are?
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Damn. Possession Shadows now? Where the hell will they fit in the hierarchy?!

Ian: Yes. That was Luke.
Ian: Check the current area, check your current inventory, and check your current sanity.
Ian: When you breathed in the Black Fog originally, you sorta became immune to it's effects and obtained your Shadow Sight.
Has contact with the Possession Shadow given you yet another ability of some sort, or amplified your current ability of Shadow Sight? I mean, as far as you can tell, or feel, at the moment?

Vortex: We need names for these abilities, damnit. I'd like to help in that regard.
Also: DAMN YOU XEEEEEEETROOOOOOV!
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Can this be...

END OF PROLOGUE CHAPTER?!

About time, man. We need to get progress in.
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ShadowNiL wrote:DAMN YOU XEEEEEEETROOOOOOV!
That took me by surprise, makes me wonder if xetroV is a character of this story.
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ShadowNiL wrote:Vortex: We need names for these abilities, damnit. I'd like to help in that regard.
<i hadn't thought of giving a name to Ian's immunity, but Shadow Sight fits pretty well :D >
ENIHCAMBUS wrote:
ShadowNiL wrote:DAMN YOU XEEEEEEETROOOOOOV!
That took me by surprise, makes me wonder if xetroV is a character of this story.
<yup. for the purposes of this story, you can treat him as one of the higher shadows, for now :P i'll tell more about it in the discussion thread.

also, if anyone thinks this wasn't already planned since the beginning, take the title screen and read it in a mirror. nearly everything's planned here, even the characters' names XD>
ShadowNiL wrote:Can this be...

END OF PROLOGUE CHAPTER?!

About time, man. We need to get progress in.
<almost! this sequence marks the end of this chapter>
ShadowNiL wrote:Ian: Yes. That was Luke.
Ian: Check the current area, check your current inventory, and check your current sanity.
Ian: When you breathed in the Black Fog originally, you sorta became immune to it's effects and obtained your Shadow Sight.
Has contact with the Possession Shadow given you yet another ability of some sort, or amplified your current ability of Shadow Sight? I mean, as far as you can tell, or feel, at the moment?
Unknown being doesn't know who Ian is. But he doesn't feel anything here. He feels at home.

He has no items.
ENIHCAMBUS wrote:Where you are?
It's a familiar place, but he can't remember...

Unknown being advances forward.

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He remembers now...

"go..."

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"RUN..."

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"FLEE!"

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"ESCAPE!!!"

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