BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter
BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter
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RULES:
-one command at a time (except for straightforward commands. no huge lists, please).
-you can make silly commands, but there is a limit. don't cross it.
-try to stay on topic. if I see more than a page of off topic, all characters are killed instantly and a puppy dies.
-I've not decided yet whether characters can die because of bad commands. be careful just in case XD
-respect other users and don't make fun of them.
-story may have mature content.
-I'll update the story whenever I can. some cases I may take a few minutes, some cases I may take days. don't rush me please
-last but not least, this is my first forum story, more like an experiment. It's likely that I'll make many mistakes, but that's part of my learning process. feel free to criticize at the end of each chapter.
Let's start!
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Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter
Command: Unknown being: Wake up?
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...Sublevel 102 wrote:Command: Unknown being: Wake up?
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Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter
Is it boy or girl?..
Command: unknown human: introduce yourself. Or you don't remember who you are and where you are?
Command: unknown human: introduce yourself. Or you don't remember who you are and where you are?
Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter
Unknown human tries to recall...Sublevel 102 wrote:Is it boy or girl?..
Command: unknown human: introduce yourself. Or you don't remember who you are and where you are?
...yes, he remembers.
His name is Ian, Ian Gerdeen, he's male and 19 years old. He's in his uncles' apartment, they invited him to spend the night there that weekend. He was sleeping in what had been his cousin's room before he left to work abroad; now it is unused and mostly empty, so his uncles are using it as a guest room.
He should get back to sleep, but he can't for some reason... everything's so silent... abnormally silent...
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Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter
Turn on the lights and look around.
Is this my final form?
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Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter
Command: Ian:
Look at window. I don't like that black outside...
Look at window. I don't like that black outside...
Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter
Ian: Quickly retrieve arms from drawer.
TT: I guess one could use those words to describe it.
TT: If armed with a predilection for the inapt.
TT: If armed with a predilection for the inapt.
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Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter
Command: Ian: Inventory.
ENIHCAMBUS: State of the Art Scanning!
Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter
The Kakama wrote:Turn on the lights and look around.
Ow... the sudden light hurts Ian's eyes a bit.
Let's see...
In front of Ian there's just a big, old wardrobe and some wooden planks leaning against the wall. In his side there's the bed, a nightstand with two drawers, and the window.
Sublevel 102 wrote:Command: Ian:
Look at window. I don't like that black outside...
It's just pitch black. Ian can't see anything. There are no streetlights on, there is no visible moon or stars in the sky... strange. And there's this disturbing silence...
What? arms? in a drawer? that's just ridiculous...Vurn wrote:Ian: Quickly retrieve arms from drawer.
wait... that is... ?
OH MY F***ING GOD... is this an arm? a HUMAN ARM?! IN THE DRAWER!?!
Nope. Much less interesting. There's just some useless papers and magazines, and Ian's wallet & keys. See?
He has nothing but his pyjama.ENIHCAMBUS wrote:Command: Ian: Inventory.
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